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Above all the insane amounts of detailing on this just blows my mind and the style is very different and visually appealing. There are a few slight problems though.

The woman’s legs are a bit too straight, there should be some sort of indication of a difference between the calf and ankle. Also her stomach should have a semblance of shapeliness to it. You want to avoid going fully straight lined on everything unless you’re going to go super heavily stylistic.

As for the man the way his legs are tucked up behind him is very confusing. At first I didn’t realize they were back there. I’d avoid going with an action pose in a pin up style picture like this, it’s awkward and can be a bit confusing to the viewer.

Still tripping over the insane amounts of detailing though, very good work on that.